School fun run
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At the start some people went so people went the wrong way. Then so people got some injuries then luckily some people helped them. Lots and lots and lots of people were walking. Lots of people came 1st,2nd and 3rd.
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Lot of people were cheering. It was so loud that I could hear it when I was at the sick bay. Some people done some shortcuts. The people that cames 1st 2nd 3rd was razelle,jack,natan. The parents were even telling you can do this when it not their child. I liked thomas in room 11 because he came 1st by himself.
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Then after a little while some people fell again. I wish that no one could have fell. Some people need to go to the office to get there asma pubmed. Lots of people went then the other group then some people came from the other group and wast them.
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